Scriptures/The Book of Mormon/1 Nephi/Chiasm/Brass Plates

Scriptures / The Book of Mormon / 1 Nephi / Chiasm

One has to keep in mind, when looking at a chiasm that spans multiple chapters, that the chapter divisions are not original to the untranslated text. I have marked chapter headings in this document in order to make it easier to reference the structural diagram here with the original text.

The thing that first suggested to me that there was a chiasm here was noticing that the name Zoram could be interpreted as "Rock of the people", or "Rock of kin", and as I thought about how Nephi might be playing with that meaning, I thought of the following passage:

And it came to pass that we fled into the wilderness, and the servants of Laban did not overtake us, and we hid ourselves in the cavity of a rock. (3:27)

Compare with our first relation of Zoram's name:

"And it came to pass that Zoram did take courage at the words which I spake. Now Zoram was the name of the servant; and he promised that he would go down into the wilderness unto our father. Yea, and he also made an oath unto us that he would tarry with us from that time forth." (4:35)

The conjunction of "rock" and "servant" felt like a strong parallel, especially given how the word "rock" doesn't come up very often, but the distance between the passages suggested not some simple localized wordplay, but rather a chiasm, a wordplay that related to the poetic structure of the text, and as I worked out what this structure might be in more detail, the idea only became more plausible.

I also think it is noteworthy that Nephi seems to be holding off on using Zoram's name until right here in this part of the text; referring to him as the "servant of Laban" multiple times before this point

The structure given below is only a rough draft. I feel that A/A' through J/J' is fairly solid, but I recognized mistakes in my original draft. K/K' through T/T' was quickly thrown together and I have not had enough time to review the work. (Nevertheless, I'm fairly certain that this particular chiasm does not extend further than chapter 3 through 5 as I both lost the ability to find plausible textual parallels and the encompassed text feels like a fairly complete story with nice counterpoint options. Though it is worth noting that this doesn't mean that there isn't a larger chiastic structure. I'm fairly certain there is one. That would make this 3-chapter chiasm a substructure of the larger structure.)

I have done some work to learn more about the meanings of names, places, and things, within the text, and I'm hoping that, upon review, this will help to clarify the text's structure.

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

1 And it came to pass that I spake unto my brethren, saying: Let us go up again unto Jerusalem, and let us be faithful in keeping the commandments of the Lord; for behold he is mightier than all the earth, then why not mightier than Laban and his fifty, yea, or even than his tens of thousands? (strength of the Lord, let us be faithful)
2 Therefore let us go up; let us be strong like unto Moses; for he truly spake unto the waters of the Red Sea and they divided hither and thither, and our fathers came through, out of captivity, on dry ground, and the armies of Pharaoh did follow and were drowned in the waters of the Red Sea. (Therefore...)

Chapter 5